Thursday, 17 December 2015
Wednesday, 9 December 2015
Feedback - 9 Dec
Hi Kelsey,
You are making some good progress in your research and planning work and I am confident that whilst there are still quite a few elements missing from your blog, you have completed them but not had a chance to upload them yet. Please make sure that any pieces of work are uploaded to your blog ASAP!
Have a check through the list of posts if you are unsure of anything you are missing.
Your research work is good and I would currently put it at around the 12/13 out of 20 region. I feel you need to improve your 'magazine industry' post and with the missing pieces of work added, You should easily be able to bring this up to the 15/16 out of 20 region. Once this is complete, we can discuss improvements from there.
You MUST have your main task questionnaire completed ASAP as well.
Holiday work is to make sure any outstanding pieces of work are completed and uploaded.
Carl.
You are making some good progress in your research and planning work and I am confident that whilst there are still quite a few elements missing from your blog, you have completed them but not had a chance to upload them yet. Please make sure that any pieces of work are uploaded to your blog ASAP!
Have a check through the list of posts if you are unsure of anything you are missing.
Your research work is good and I would currently put it at around the 12/13 out of 20 region. I feel you need to improve your 'magazine industry' post and with the missing pieces of work added, You should easily be able to bring this up to the 15/16 out of 20 region. Once this is complete, we can discuss improvements from there.
You MUST have your main task questionnaire completed ASAP as well.
Holiday work is to make sure any outstanding pieces of work are completed and uploaded.
Carl.
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